Santa

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Opening gifts is probably the greatest part about Chirstmas. Around midnight the guests and family members gather up around the Christmas tree. The youngest children get to open thier presents first. When everyones done opening presents everyone thanks each other for the presents. Although the children who still believe in Santa wonder whats going on. Since all the presents are unwrapped theres a huge mess, so everyone pitches in to help. Later the adults sing Christmas Carols while the kids go off to play with their new toys.

Public Comments

1. In most typical American households, the greatest part about Christmas is opening presents. Around midnight (are you sure about this?? i think it is more around 10 am) families and guests gather around the Christmas tree. The youngest children usually are the first to get a hold of their presents and unwrap the brightly colored gifts. Many of these children believe that their gifts are presents from Santa Claus, a fictional character in many children's lives. Once the presents are unwrapped parents and children pitch in to help clean up the wrapping paper mess. Then the adults go off to the kitchen to start breakfast, or sing Christmas Carols, while the children sit around the living room to play with their new toys.