Santa - is this poem good so far?

is this poem good so far?

A is for angels whose wings are so beautiful, And acts are so delightful. B is for Bethlehem where they were all night, Baby Jesus completely in sight. C is for cookies that you leave out for Santa, Even if you live in Atlanta. D is for donkey that was in the barn that evening, No, you were not dreaming. E is for Eggnog that comes out once a year, Yes, that’s only when it appears. F is for Frosty the Snowman a very famous song, Many people for sure can sing along. G is for the Grinch, where Christmas was thought to be stolen but not, No one else even gave it a thought. H is for holly that hangs around your house, Even ones where there is so much as one little mouse. I is for icicles that hang on your roof, Go look outside, you will see proof. J is for Jesus whose birthday is celebrated. It should always be appreciated. K is for Kris Kringle Anyone who would meet him would probably want to mingle. L is for Lights that are put up on a Christmas tree, It gives many people so much glee. M is for Merry Christmas which many people say. It is quite a wonderful holiday. N is for Noël who was the first, With happiness that could make you burst. O is for ornaments that dress your tree up in many colors to see, I’m sure everyone else will agree. P is for Pointsetta to make your house look more bright, You look around and everyone is blown out of sight. we were told to make a rhyming poem using the alphabet having to do with xmas

Public Comments

Way too long and using the alphabet is cheese fest.
I 2nd that!
no it sucks unless you were instructed to use the alphabet...then it's pretty generic
I'd change D for Donkey and the stuff you put afterwards ... it sounds like you got raped by a donkey in the barn. lol the rest is okay but could use improvements here and there.
awsome but some improvements